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A large company needs an english translator for project

A large company needs an english translator for project n1KXP
Dear Sir I am writing to apply for the position of translator advertised in Sunday's good Times. I saw this advertisement on monday morning. I am, therefore, enclosing my resume indicates. I have a very strong background in applied translator. I have been working as a translator for ten years. When I was studying at Institute. At that time I took tourists to show our historical monuments and places in the city. These days I am working as a translator in british company. I know english, french and german But my native language is english so I know english excellent. I have C1 certificate in cefr. I am punctual and hardworking, sociable person. I am used to working pressure. I can find the way to solve any problem. I have much energy to work all day becouse I like my job very much. it gives me much enjoyment. My contract will finish at the end of this month. I will begin working in your office If you accept me in your office. Personally, I am suitable open position in your company. I will bring much profit. I look forward to meeting or talking with you soon. Yours faithfullyJohn Brown
Dear Sir I am writing to apply for the position of
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translator
advertised in Sunday's
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good
Times. I
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saw
this advertisement on
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monday
morning. I am,
therefore
, enclosing my resume indicates.
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I
have a
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very
strong background in applied
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translator
.
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I
have been
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working
as a
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translator
for ten years.
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When
I was studying at Institute. At that time I took tourists to
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show
our historical monuments and places in the city. These days I am
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working
as a
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translator
in
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british
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company
. I know
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english
, french and
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german
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But
my native language is english
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so
I know
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english
excellent. I have C1 certificate in
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cefr
.
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I
am punctual and hardworking, sociable person.
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I
am
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used
to
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working
pressure.
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I
can find the way to solve any problem.
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I
have
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much
energy to work all day
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becouse
I like my job
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very
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much
.
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it
gives me
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much
enjoyment. My contract will finish at the
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end
of this month. I will
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begin
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working
in your office If you accept me in your office.
Personally
, I am suitable open position in your
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company
. I will bring
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much
profit. I look forward to meeting or talking with you
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soon
. Yours
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faithfullyJohn
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Brown
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IELTS letter A large company needs an english translator for project

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
198 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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