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you saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event

you saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event E9D2M

Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to inform you about my interest on volunteer for charity event which was published an advertise in the newspaper. I would like to explain how I was organized and interested to help the charity. Firstly, I would like to share my thoughts on how my interest started towards helping hands. During my schooling, I have helped orphanage charities as a fundraiser, and I spent a lot of time with the elders and children. Their smiles make me happy and boost me to spend more time in the coming calendar years. Since I’m very familiar with the charity organization. I can arrange some sponsor for the charities, and I will provide basic things for orphanages like food, books etc. I think this would be very helpful for orphanages to make them happy. I hope that you will consider my application to work with your organization. Yours sincerely, Dinesh

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to inform you about my interest on volunteer for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
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event
 which was published
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advertise
 in the newspaper. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 how I was organized
 and interested to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the charity.

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started
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helped
 orphanage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charities
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a lot of
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make
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Since
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 familiar with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
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some
 sponsor for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
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think
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make
 them happy.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope that you will consider my application to work with your organization.

Yours sincerely
,

Dinesh