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You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter: explain why you are interested in helping give details suitable past experience suggest ways you might help with the event

Respected sir, I am writing this letter to be a volunteer in your charity trust, as I saw an advertisement published in the Gujarat samachar newspaper asking for volunteers on 10th June. I want to join your organization for your upcoming event on 14th june because it provides a good service to save birds. I really feel glad to give my best as it's our moral duty. In Fact I had done the same work with this type of event, so I would like to explain my previous experience. When I was in school I became a volunteer in such events organised by our school for poor people in our town. I was giving them food packets, clothes, toys to children etc. Moreover, I am also an animal lover so I feel happy helping injured birds especially on 14th January kite festival. During this festival many bird's wings, neck and some other body parts will be damaged by thred. I have been working with various trusts and have different work experience with them. Since I am familiar with this kind of work. I can take responsibility of any one unit whichever provides me at any location. I am grateful if I can help human beings. So please consider my request in anticipation. It's been a pleasure to become a member of your establishment. Your Respectfully Hemang Patel

Respected sir,

I am writing this letter to be a volunteer in your charity trust, as I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 an advertisement published in the Gujarat Possible spelling mistake found.SalazarSamanthaYamahaCamachoSamarSamara
samachar
 newspaper asking for volunteers on 10th June. I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 your organization for your upcoming This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 on 14th Possible spelling mistake found.JunetuneJaneJunJungJuno
june
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it provides a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 service to save birds. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
really
 feel glad to give my best as it's our moral duty. In The comma is probably missing here: “Fact, I”.Fact, I
Fact I
 had done the same work with this type of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my previous experience.

When I was in school I became a volunteer in such This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
Possible spelling mistake. ‘organised’ is British English.organized
organised
 by our school for poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in our town. I was giving them food packets, clothes, toys to children etc. Moreover
, I am also
 an animal lover This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I feel happy helping injured birds especially
 on 14th January kite festival. During this festival This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 bird's wings, neck and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other body parts will be damaged
 by Possible spelling mistake found.threethrewthreadtiredshredtared
thred
. I have been working with various trusts and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 work experience with them.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 I am familiar with this kind of work. I can take responsibility of any one unit whichever provides me at any location. I am grateful if I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 human beings. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 consider my request in anticipation.

It's been a pleasure to become a member of your establishment.

Your Respectfully


Possible spelling mistake found.Hem ang
Hemang
 Patel