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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Dear Ria, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits, I would like to give you some good news that I have planned to visit your country next month for holidays and also spend some time with you. I have scheduled my visit to on 7th of March to 15th March, I am traveling from Delhi International Airport my flight will be arriving here by 11 am on 7th of March. I have booked Hotel The Paradise for my stay. As per my research, there are many tourist spots in your country I am planning to visit all of them starting from Universal Studio to Hanging Gardens. If you can help me with the best time and day to visit these places so that they are comparatively less crowded and I could have a good sightseeing experience. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours Lovingly, Xyz
Dear
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Ria
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Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits, I would like to give you
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some
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good
news that I have planned to
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visit
your country
next
month for holidays and
also
spend
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some
time with you.

I have scheduled my
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visit
to on 7th of March to 15th March, I am traveling from Delhi International Airport my flight will be arriving here by 11 am on 7th of March. I have booked Hotel The Paradise for my stay.

As per my research, there are
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many
tourist spots in your country I am planning to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
all of them starting from Universal Studio to Hanging Gardens. If you can
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help
me with the best time and day to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
these places
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so
that they are
comparatively
less
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crowded and
I could have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
sightseeing experience.

Looking forward to seeing you
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soon
.

Yours
Lovingly
,

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Xyz

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

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  American English
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149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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