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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Dear Ria, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits, I would like to give you some good news that I have planned to visit your country next month for holidays and also spend some time with you. I have scheduled my visit to on 7th of March to 15th March, I am traveling from Delhi International Airport my flight will be arriving here by 11 am on 7th of March. I have booked Hotel The Paradise for my stay. As per my research, there are many tourist spots in your country I am planning to visit all of them starting from Universal Studio to Hanging Gardens. If you can help me with the best time and day to visit these places so that they are comparatively less crowded and I could have a good sightseeing experience. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours Lovingly, Xyz

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good
 news that I have planned to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visit
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 month for holidays and also
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some
 time with you.

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visit
 to on 7th of March to 15th March, I am traveling from Delhi International Airport my flight will be arriving here by 11 am on 7th of March. I have booked Hotel The Paradise for my stay.

As per my research, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 tourist spots in your country I am planning to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visit
 all of them starting from Universal Studio to Hanging Gardens. If you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with the best time and day to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visit
 these places This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they are comparatively
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 I could have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 sightseeing experience.

Looking forward to seeing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Lovingly
,

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