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There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.

Dear sam, Hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and best of Spirit. I am writing this letter to invite you to celebrate our traditional Festival Diwali with My family and Friends. while we were Studied together last two year, you were promised to me that you will be visiting india. As I believe this is the best time of the year to come to india While Diwali is our Hindu religion Festival. it falls in October or November. That week called festival week. On that day of Diwali, people decorate the house with glittering bulbs, do traditional painting on floor. On that day relatives and friend Visit each other For wishing a new year, as according to the indian culture. I know you are lover for art and culture. Why don’t you Visit this year in November? We will be celebrating this festival and enjoying this day. I hope you can make it this time and be part of celebration. Warm Regard Hemang

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“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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I know you are lover for art and culture. Why don’t you Visit this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 in November? We will be celebrating this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfairfeastanniversarycompetitiongalaholiday
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 and enjoying this day.

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 it this time and be part of celebration.

Warm Did you mean “Regards”?Regards
Regard


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Hemang