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Complaint letter for the item

Complaint letter for the item LBJW3
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to complain about vacuum cleaner which I recently bought from your shop. After only three days, things started to go wrong. In June 4 I visited one of your local ships in order to buy a vacuum cleaner. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a ship assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Three days later, I noticed the problem of the vacuum cleaner. When I used it for the first time it worked properly and dusted well. However, when I utilized it the second time there seemed to have been a mulfunction while it was working and began to make a loud noise. Furthermore, when I tried using once more the same thing happened. In addition to this, the vacuum cleaner overheated. I would like you to replace the vacuum cleaner with well functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately I will be forced to report this to Customer service association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfullyAtadjanova Umida
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to complain about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cleaner
which I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from your shop. After
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
three days, things
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to go
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wrong
.
Did you mean "on June"? This seems to be a day date.
In June
4 I visited one of your local ships in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cleaner
. Looking around the shop I encountered
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
item and I asked a ship assistant about it.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
getting all information I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
it. Three days later, I noticed the problem of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cleaner
. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
it for the
first
time it worked
properly
and dusted well.
However
, when I utilized it the second time there seemed to have been a
Possible spelling mistake found.
mulfunction
while it was working and began to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a loud noise.
Furthermore
, when I tried using once more the same thing happened.
In addition
to this, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cleaner
overheated. I would like you to replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cleaner
with well functioning one. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
to receive the same type of unit and brand.
Otherwise
, unfortunately I will
be forced
to report this to Customer service association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours
Possible spelling mistake found.
faithfullyAtadjanova
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Umida
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IELTS letter Complaint letter for the item

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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