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Complaint letter for the item

Complaint letter for the item LBJW3

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to complain about vacuum cleaner which I recently bought from your shop. After only three days, things started to go wrong. In June 4 I visited one of your local ships in order to buy a vacuum cleaner. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a ship assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Three days later, I noticed the problem of the vacuum cleaner. When I used it for the first time it worked properly and dusted well. However, when I utilized it the second time there seemed to have been a mulfunction while it was working and began to make a loud noise. Furthermore, when I tried using once more the same thing happened. In addition to this, the vacuum cleaner overheated. I would like you to replace the vacuum cleaner with well functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately I will be forced to report this to Customer service association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfullyAtadjanova Umida

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to complain about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvoidgap
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcleansersoapdisinfectant
cleaner
 which I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your shop. After This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 three days, things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. Did you mean "on June"? This seems to be a day date.On June
In June
 4 I visited one of your local ships in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvoidgap
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcleansersoapdisinfectant
cleaner
. Looking around the shop I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item and I asked a ship assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Three days later, I noticed the problem of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvoidgap
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcleansersoapdisinfectant
cleaner
. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 it for the first
 time it worked properly
 and dusted well. However
, when I utilized it the second time there seemed to have been a Possible spelling mistake found.malfunction
mulfunction
 while it was working and began to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a loud noise. Furthermore
, when I tried using once more the same thing happened. In addition
 to this, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvoidgap
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcleansersoapdisinfectant
cleaner
 overheated. I would like you to replace the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvoidgap
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcleansersoapdisinfectant
cleaner
 with well functioning one. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately I will be forced
 to report this to Customer service association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours Possible spelling mistake found.
faithfullyAtadjanova
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