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Apply for a position in the nursing house

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Dear Hiring Manager, My name is Time Cook. I am writing to apply for the position that can take care of senior people in the nursing house. I heard about this position in the newspaper. After the pandemic, it is not easy for nursing houses to recruit a new staff. So, I would like to offer helps to nursing houses and old people, getting through this critical situation with them. About me, I am an experienced social worker with a relevant bachelor’s degree in psychology. Currently, I am an volunteer in the community. As part of my duties, I have to help seniors clean their houses, take them to clinics and organize some activities to let them connect with others, staying healthy mentally and physically. I believe these experiences make me an ideal candidate for this position. Besides, I am available from June 25, 2021. I would like to schedule an appointment with you manually if you are interested in my application. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Tim Cook
Dear Hiring Manager,

My name is Time Cook. I am writing to apply for the position that can take care of senior
people
in the nursing
house
.

I heard about this position in the newspaper. After the pandemic, it is not easy for nursing
houses
to recruit a new staff.
So
, I would like to offer
helps
to nursing
houses
and
old
people
, getting through this critical situation with them.

About me, I am an experienced social worker with a relevant bachelor’s degree in psychology.
Currently
, I am
an
volunteer in the community. As part of my duties, I
have to
help
seniors clean their
houses
, take them to clinics and organize
some
activities to
let
them connect with others, staying healthy mentally and
physically
. I believe these experiences
make
me an ideal candidate for this position.

Besides
, I am available from June 25, 2021. I would like to schedule an appointment with you
manually
if you
are interested
in my application.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
,

Tim Cook
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IELTS letter Apply for a position in the nursing house

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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