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You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. QL8Q3

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the great tour walking in the mountains. Ever since my childhood, I have always been dreamed of making a trip to the mountains and cliking photographs of the nature. I see this tour, as a an opportunity to fulfill my dreams and pull me away from my daily work routine. This has been my lifelong passion that I want to fulfill it. On the brouchere I was able to find about the trip and it's requirement but i was not able to find about the dates and prices. Could yoou provide me any the additional details and other's that I need to know. As per requirement, my height has to be 5. 5 ft minimum, but I am only 5. 4 ft and I had a knee surgery three months back. I would be grateful to know whether are there any additional support that could be provided for my fitness level. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Jack

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to the great tour walking in the mountains. Ever since my childhood, I have always been dreamed
 of making a trip to the mountains and Possible spelling mistake found.clickinglikingclinkingc liking
cliking
 photographs of the nature.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 this tour, as Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "a" or "an" is left.aan
a an
 opportunity to fulfill my dreams and pull me away from my daily work routine. This has been my lifelong passion that I want to fulfill it. On the Possible spelling mistake found.grouchierbrochurebroughamBoucherbouchée
brouchere
 I was able to find about the trip and it's requirement This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was not able to find about the dates and prices. Could Possible spelling mistake found.youyewsyew
yoou
 provide me any the additional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 and other's that I need to know.

As per requirement, my height This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 be 5. Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.5 ft (1.52 m)5 ft (1.52 meters)5 ft (ca. 152 cm)5 ft (152.4 cm)5 ft (ca. 152 centimeters)5 ft (152.4 centimeters)
5 ft
 minimum, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 5. Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.4 ft (1.22 m)4 ft (1.22 meters)4 ft (ca. 122 cm)4 ft (121.92 cm)4 ft (ca. 122 centimeters)4 ft (121.92 centimeters)
4 ft
 and I had a knee surgery three months back. I would be grateful to know whether are there any additional support that could be provided
 for my fitness level. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely
,

Jack