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Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it OVgJy

Dear Sir or Madam, Two days ago a HTC mobile cover was ordered on your e-commerce website. I was really excited about my dream mobile cover, but unfortunately when it arrived! It made me really sad and disappointed, because it was not the same which was promised by you, furthermore, it is totally useless because it does not fit to my handset, it does not support my mobile phone. Anyhow, after this shock, I was anticipating that your company would help me and replace wrong order without any issue.

Dear Sir or Madam,

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HTC
 mobile cover was ordered
 on your e-commerce website. I was really
 excited about my dream mobile cover, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 unfortunately when it arrived! It made me really
 sad and disappointed, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it was not the same which was promised
 by you, furthermore
, it is totally
 useless This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it does not fit to my handset, it does not support my mobile phone. Anyhow, after this shock, I was anticipating that your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me and replace This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 order without any issue. 

IELTS letter Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Letter

American English

2 paragraphs

89 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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