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Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it OVgJy
Dear Sir or Madam, Two days ago a HTC mobile cover was ordered on your e-commerce website. I was really excited about my dream mobile cover, but unfortunately when it arrived! It made me really sad and disappointed, because it was not the same which was promised by you, furthermore, it is totally useless because it does not fit to my handset, it does not support my mobile phone. Anyhow, after this shock, I was anticipating that your company would help me and replace wrong order without any issue.
Dear Sir or Madam,

Two days ago a
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HTC
mobile cover
was ordered
on your e-commerce website. I was
really
excited about my dream mobile cover,
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but
unfortunately when it arrived! It made me
really
sad and disappointed,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it was not the same which
was promised
by you,
furthermore
, it is
totally
useless
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it does not fit to my handset, it does not support my mobile phone. Anyhow, after this shock, I was anticipating that your
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company
would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me and replace
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
order without any issue.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

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  American English
2 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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