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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities KwWAL

Dear Mr. Singh I, XYZ, am a great fan of you, I had attended tours live singing event that was organized by the IIT students at the national stadium two months ago. Such an alluring performance insisted I to write you as I am inclined to your music style. It was a fabulous, amazing, and outstanding exhibition of your talent. You are gifted with requisite qualities of melodies and it is much more moving than anything ever. While strumming the guitar, it took my breath away. Because I am interested in playing the same instrument but I do not have proper knowledge of all the keys and the sound which they produce. Even though I play sometimes in church services, the tones have not been synchronized. Therefore, I would be grateful if you allow me to join guitar lessons. In case, there is a special session. Thank you and I am looking to hear from you at the earliest. Yours sincerely XYX

Dear Mr. Singh

I, XYZ, am a great fan of you, I had attended tours This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 singing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 that was organized
 by the IIT students at the national stadium two months ago. Such an alluring performance insisted I to write you as I am inclined
 to your music style.

It was a fabulous, amazing, and outstanding exhibition of your talent. You are gifted
 with requisite qualities of melodies and it is much more moving than anything ever. While strumming the guitar, it took my breath away.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I am interested
 in playing the same instrument This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I do not have proper knowledge of all the keys and the sound which they produce. Even though
 I play This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 in church services, the tones have not been synchronized
.

Therefore
, I would be grateful if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 guitar lessons. In case, there is a special session.

Thank Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).you, and
you and
 I am looking to hear from you at the earliest.

Yours sincerely


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