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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities. QL89y
Dear Ed Sheeran, I am writing this letter to congratulate you on the amazing performance showcased at the Opera House, Sydney. It was simply electrifying. I am sure that everyone there in the audience felt the same. It was like a dream come true for me as I had always dreamt of seeing your performance live. To be honest, I could not take my eyes of your performance for a second. The lyrics were heart-warming, my eyes were filled with tears towards the end of the show. I am a final year music student, studying at the Sydney Conservatorium of Music, New South Wales. We are planning to organize a music concert by the end of April and this will be our first performance. If you could mentor me during the practice sessions conducted at our college, it will be a great help for me, as I will the lead singer performing at the concert. I know you have a busy schedule, but I believe your guidance will certainly help me build my confidence and improve my current skills. Hope to hear from you soon. Sincerely, Katherine Tessa
Dear Ed Sheeran,

I am writing this letter to congratulate you on the amazing performance showcased at the Opera
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House
, Sydney.

It was
simply
electrifying. I am sure that everyone there in the audience felt the same. It was like a dream
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come
true for me as I had always dreamt of seeing your performance
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live
. To be honest, I could not take my eyes of your performance for a second. The lyrics were heart-warming, my eyes
were filled
with tears towards the
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end
of the
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show
.

I am a final year music student, studying at the Sydney
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Conservatorium
of Music, New South Wales. We are planning to organize a music concert by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of April and this will be our
first
performance.

If you could mentor me during the practice sessions conducted at our college, it will be a great
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help
for me, as I will the lead singer performing at the concert. I know you have a busy schedule,
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but
I believe your guidance will
certainly
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help
me build my confidence and
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improve
my
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current
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skills
.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Sincerely
,

Katherine Tessa
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IELTS letter You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

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8 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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