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You have recently come back from an Overseas holiday. You faced some problem with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter Details about how hotel booking problem that you faced there Give suggestions to the travel agents that such problem are not repeated

You have recently come back from an Overseas holiday. You faced some problem with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter Details about how hotel booking problem that you faced there Give suggestions to the travel agents that such problem are not repeated YBEgK
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction with the services provided by Hotel "Moon Star" during our vacations in Canada booked by your company. I reserved a one week Toronto tour by your travelling agency last Sunday. and as per the itinerary, our stay was confirmed for deluxe accommodation with including all meals along with complimentary pickup and drop. However, the holidays started with troubles. Firstly, to my frustration, there was no transportation facility to pick up at the airport. Secondly, I was charged extra for all the foodstuff provided at the hotel. Thirdly, the allocated room was a standard category with hardly any luxury as promised during the agreement. The pathetic experience is very disheartening and disappointing. I would strongly recommend you that being such a reputed travel agent you should clarify all the services, facilities and charges with your network Hotels so that your customers could be benefited with optimum services. Moreover, I firmly assert adequate compensation for the extra expenses I incurred in Canada and all the bills are enclosed for your reference. I am looking forward to hearing from you as early as possible. Thanking you, Faithfully yours, Amit
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction with the services provided by Hotel
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Moon Star
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during our vacations in Canada booked by your
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company
. I reserved a
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one week
Toronto tour by your travelling agency last Sunday.
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and
as per the itinerary, our stay
was confirmed
for deluxe accommodation with including all meals along with complimentary pickup and drop.

However
, the holidays
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
with troubles.
Firstly
, to my frustration, there was no transportation facility to pick up at the airport.
Secondly
, I
was charged
extra for all the foodstuff provided at the hotel.
Thirdly
, the allocated room was a standard category with hardly any luxury as promised during the agreement.

The pathetic experience is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
disheartening and disappointing. I would
strongly
recommend you that being such a reputed travel agent you should clarify all the services, facilities and charges with your network Hotels
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that your customers could
be benefited
with optimum services.
Moreover
, I
firmly
assert adequate compensation for the extra expenses I incurred in Canada and all the bills
are enclosed
for your reference.

I am looking forward to hearing from you as early as possible.

Thanking you,

Faithfully
yours,

Amit
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IELTS letter You have recently come back from an Overseas holiday. You faced some problem with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter Details about how hotel booking problem that you faced there Give suggestions to the travel agents that such problem are not repeated

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