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You have recently come back from an Overseas holiday. You faced some problem with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter Details about how hotel booking problem that you faced there Give suggestions to the travel agents that such problem are not repeated

You have recently come back from an Overseas holiday. You faced some problem with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter Details about how hotel booking problem that you faced there Give suggestions to the travel agents that such problem are not repeated YBEgK

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction with the services provided by Hotel "Moon Star" during our vacations in Canada booked by your company. I reserved a one week Toronto tour by your travelling agency last Sunday. and as per the itinerary, our stay was confirmed for deluxe accommodation with including all meals along with complimentary pickup and drop. However, the holidays started with troubles. Firstly, to my frustration, there was no transportation facility to pick up at the airport. Secondly, I was charged extra for all the foodstuff provided at the hotel. Thirdly, the allocated room was a standard category with hardly any luxury as promised during the agreement. The pathetic experience is very disheartening and disappointing. I would strongly recommend you that being such a reputed travel agent you should clarify all the services, facilities and charges with your network Hotels so that your customers could be benefited with optimum services. Moreover, I firmly assert adequate compensation for the extra expenses I incurred in Canada and all the bills are enclosed for your reference. I am looking forward to hearing from you as early as possible. Thanking you, Faithfully yours, Amit

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction with the services provided by Hotel Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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Moon StarUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
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 during our vacations in Canada booked by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I reserved a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "one-week"one-week
one week
 Toronto tour by your travelling agency last Sunday. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 as per the itinerary, our stay was confirmed
 for deluxe accommodation with including all meals along with complimentary pickup and drop.

However
, the holidays This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with troubles. Firstly
, to my frustration, there was no transportation facility to pick up at the airport. Secondly
, I was charged
 extra for all the foodstuff provided at the hotel. Thirdly
, the allocated room was a standard category with hardly any luxury as promised during the agreement.

The pathetic experience is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 disheartening and disappointing. I would strongly
 recommend you that being such a reputed travel agent you should clarify all the services, facilities and charges with your network Hotels This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that your customers could be benefited
 with optimum services. Moreover
, I firmly
 assert adequate compensation for the extra expenses I incurred in Canada and all the bills are enclosed
 for your reference.

I am looking forward to hearing from you as early as possible.

Thanking you,

Faithfully
 yours,

Amit

IELTS letter You have recently come back from an Overseas holiday. You faced some problem with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter Details about how hotel booking problem that you faced there Give suggestions to the travel agents that such problem are not repeated

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

199 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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