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You resently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly.Write Letter to your mechanic.

You resently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly. Write Letter to your mechanic. 3Lyem
Dear Mr BrownI am one of your regularly costumer, you resently had my car repaired but unfortunately my car's air conditioner isn't working again I paid for your service, I will show you next time my recaet if you don't believe me. When I was driving on the way it didn't work its motor too. Last Sunday I phoned to your office and your assistant said that you have gone away to another country to improve your qualification and your assistant agreed with me to repair once more again, but when I go there he wasn't in his work. I was so nervous such kind of situation, Please repair my car yourself Your faithfully Ben
Dear Mr
BrownI
am one of your
regularly
costumer, you
resently
had my car repaired
but
unfortunately my car's air conditioner isn't working again I paid for your service, I will
show
you
next
time my
recaet
if you don't believe me.
When
I was driving on the way it didn't work its motor too. Last Sunday I phoned to your office and your assistant said that you have gone away to another country to
improve
your qualification and your assistant
agreed
with me to repair once more again,
but
when I go there he wasn't in his work. I was
so
nervous such kind of situation,
Please
repair my car yourself Your
faithfully
Ben
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IELTS letter You resently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly. Write Letter to your mechanic.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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