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You resently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly.Write Letter to your mechanic.

You resently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly. Write Letter to your mechanic. 3Lyem

Dear Mr BrownI am one of your regularly costumer, you resently had my car repaired but unfortunately my car's air conditioner isn't working again I paid for your service, I will show you next time my recaet if you don't believe me. When I was driving on the way it didn't work its motor too. Last Sunday I phoned to your office and your assistant said that you have gone away to another country to improve your qualification and your assistant agreed with me to repair once more again, but when I go there he wasn't in his work. I was so nervous such kind of situation, Please repair my car yourself Your faithfully Ben

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 I was driving on the way it didn't work its motor too. Last Sunday I phoned to your office and your assistant said that you have gone away to another country to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 your qualification and your assistant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 with me to repair once more again, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when I go there he wasn't in his work. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 nervous such kind of situation, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 repair my car yourself Your faithfully
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IELTS letter You resently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly. Write Letter to your mechanic.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

114 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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