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You have visited the workplace of one of your parents recently. you have been shown around and have been able to observe the work of some people. write a letter to your foreign pen-pal sharing your impressions and describe

You have visited the workplace of one of your parents recently. you have been shown around and have been able to observe the work of some people. write a letter to your foreign pen-pal sharing your impressions and describe 3Ly2w

Hi Jack, Thanks for your last letter. It was very interesting for me to read it. Anyway, the reason I am writing to you is to tell you about my mother's workplace that I visited recently. She works as a director at her own office. The company deals with real estate. While walking through the office, I saw a lot of people doing different types of work. Some of them were signing documents and stamping. The other employees were working on computers in programs for the visualization of construction projects. The thing I liked the most about the office is how people relate to each other. They worked fast and harmoniously. Their eyes were filled with the desire to work. Moreover, most of the workers offered help to the others, thereby further showing their concern for work. Apart from this, I can not highlight anything I disliked in my mother's workplace. The visit helped me to choose my future profession. While watching their work I understood that working on visualisation of new buildings is very entertaining. Сreative thinking and correct calculations lead to the creation of unique projects. So, I am seriously thinking about working in real estate in the future. Well, I think, that's all. Looking forward to your reply, Toni

Hi Jack,

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, that's all.

Looking forward to your reply,

Toni