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You are doing a full time job and a part time course, write letter to institute to inform that you cannot continue this course

You are doing a full time job and a part time course, write letter to institute to inform that you cannot continue this course W8WON
Dear Mr. Parker, I am a student of IFRS course in your institution. I am writing this letter to inform you that I would not be able to attend classes from 20th Sep 2021 onwards. Iam hoping that you will allow me to continue this course with new intake from December 2021. I work with a software company as Manager Finance. Due to some recently assigned responsibilities, my work demands more of my time. I have some strict deadlines ahead. I needto spend few extra hours at work each day. Also, I am travelling to Canada next month for some official work. All these commitments at work are forcing me to discontinue this course for the time being. But I want to complete this course as it would be helpful in my career growth. I humbly request you to allow me to continue this course in next available batch. This would help me to fulfill my professional commitments on one hand and complete this course on the other hand. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mary Jane
Dear Mr. Parker,

I am a student of IFRS
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course
in your institution. I am writing this letter to inform you that I would not be able to attend classes from 20th Sep 2021 onwards.
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Iam
hoping that you will
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allow
me to continue this
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course
with new intake from December 2021.

I
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work
with a software
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company
as Manager Finance. Due to
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some
recently assigned responsibilities, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
demands more of my time. I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
strict deadlines ahead. I
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needto
spend few extra hours at
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work
each day.
Also
, I am travelling to Canada
next
month for
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some
official
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. All these commitments at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
are forcing me to discontinue this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
for the time being.
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But
I want to complete this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as it would be helpful in my career growth.

I
humbly
request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to continue this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in
next
available batch. This would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to fulfill my professional commitments on one hand and complete this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
on the other hand
.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Mary Jane
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IELTS letter You are doing a full time job and a part time course, write letter to institute to inform that you cannot continue this course

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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