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You relocated to a new country for work. Write to your previous co-worker. In your letter – Tell him/her where you live in the new country – Describe how you feel – Explain what you are doing at work – Invite him/her for a visit.

You relocated to a new country for work. Write to your previous co-worker. In your letter – Tell him/her where you live in the new country – Describe how you feel – Explain what you are doing at work – Invite him/her for a visit. 6xaPj
Dear John, Hope you are doing good and your family. You know very well about me that I was looking for a software testing job in the USA. I have got an opportunity recently that my client recruits me and arranged all my expenses to migrate to the US. I have recently migrated to the USA 2 weeks ago. I am staying in Foster City, CA which is very near to my office. Besides, the climate is awesome and feel fresh air here. People here at my apartment are very friendly and helped me to settle over here. I am happy at my work that my duties are collecting requirements from the business and testing the software and report defects to the developer which makes my job very satisfactory. I know you are good at photographs and you're professional too. I invite you can also have a vacation with your family this summer here at Foster city which you may also feel the same freshness. People usually here would go to the beach in the summers. So it would be better you can come here in this summer along with your family and spend more time together. Convey my regards to your family. Best WIshes Jithendra
Dear John,

Hope you are doing
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good
and your family. You know
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very
well about me that I was looking for a software testing job in the USA. I have
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got
an opportunity recently that my client recruits me and arranged all my expenses to migrate to the US. I have recently migrated to the USA 2 weeks ago.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am staying in Foster City, CA which is
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very
near to my office.
Besides
, the climate is awesome and feel fresh air here.
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People
here at my apartment are
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very
friendly and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me to settle over here.

I am happy at my work that my duties are collecting requirements from the business and testing the software and report defects to the developer which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
my job
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very
satisfactory.

I know you are
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good
at photographs and you're professional too.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
invite you can
also
have a vacation with your family this summer here at Foster city which you may
also
feel the same freshness.
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People
usually
here would go to the beach in the summers.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
it would be better you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here in this summer along with your family and spend more time together.

Convey my regards to your family.

Best
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WIshes


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Jithendra
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IELTS letter You relocated to a new country for work. Write to your previous co-worker. In your letter – Tell him/her where you live in the new country – Describe how you feel – Explain what you are doing at work – Invite him/her for a visit.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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