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You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreign country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. You letter should include: 1. When you hope to be staying at the resort 2. Ask for suggestions on activities to do 3. Ask for advice on places to eat for both vegetarian and family friendly places.

You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreign country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. You letter should include: 1. When you hope to be staying at the resort 2. Ask for suggestions on activities to do 3. Ask for advice on places to eat for both vegetarian and family friendly places. 85d7l
Dear Sir/Madam, Trust this letter finds you well I, along with my friends, am planning a trip to Phuket town prior to the coming New Year, which will last for a fortnight starting from 30th December to 14th January 2021. Hence, I would like to seek a few details about the arrangements at your Marina resort, situated near Patong Beach. The total number of people includes 3 couples and 2 adolescents. Regarding things-to-do, I tried to browse about the fire show, but, couldn't get much information, would you please share some insight on the aforesaid? Although I have planned a specific set of activities offered such as pool parties, scuba diving, however, I will appreciate if you can recommend some of your best-served activities for families. Though, Thailand is known for its exquisite cuisine which offers a variety of sea-food. I would also like to seek some suggestions regarding any vegetarian plus family-oriented restaurants that can be visited during our stay, since some of the people in our group, do not prefer animal-based delicacies. Thank you so much for your time and support. Looking forward to hearing from you soon Regards, Swarnim Tripathi
Dear Sir/Madam,

Trust this letter finds you well

I, along with my friends,
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am
planning a trip to Phuket town prior to the coming New Year, which will last for a fortnight starting from 30th December to 14th January 2021.
Hence
, I would like to seek a few
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details
about the arrangements at your Marina resort, situated near
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Patong
Beach. The total number of
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people
includes 3 couples and 2 adolescents.

Regarding things-to-do, I tried to browse about the fire
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show
,
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but
, couldn't
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get
much information, would you
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please
share
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some
insight on the aforesaid? Although I have planned a specific set of activities offered such as pool parties, scuba diving,
however
, I will appreciate if you can recommend
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some
of your best-served activities for families.

Though, Thailand
is known
for its exquisite cuisine which offers a variety of sea-food. I would
also
like to seek
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some
suggestions regarding any vegetarian plus family-oriented restaurants that can
be visited
during our stay, since
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some of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in our group, do not prefer animal-based delicacies.

Thank you
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so
much for your time and support.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon


Regards,

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Swarnim
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Tripathi
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IELTS letter You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreign country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. You letter should include: 1. When you hope to be staying at the resort 2. Ask for suggestions on activities to do 3. Ask for advice on places to eat for both vegetarian and family friendly places.

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