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You recently went to concert and thought one of the singers was very good. write a letter to the singer; In your letter say how you feel about performance. give details of your music activates. explain how you would like him to help your with musical activates.

You recently went to concert and thought one of the singers was very good. write a letter to the singer; In your letter say how you feel about performance. give details of your music activates. explain how you would like him to help your with musical activates. B1gd
I am reaching you regarding your marvelous musical performance at Rogers center held last summer. I can not stop saying this you are blessed with an excellent pitch of melody tone that makes me forget myself and taken to your music world. Not only the voice but also the lyrics are very understanding and meaningful with fantastic word choice. Adding music to that is the next level. I am a keyboard player, started composing in high school. Furthermore, I have a small band of 5 people, play instruments for the church on Sunday services. Moreover, this city hosts a competition for young talented youth, looking for some encouraging us providing sponsorship. For your reference sending one of my composed songs with the letter, hoping you are the person to represent us. If you think we possess the potentiality to participate in the competition reach us back, looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you Bala
I am reaching you regarding your marvelous musical performance at Rogers center held last summer.

I can not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
saying this you
are blessed
with an excellent pitch of melody tone that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me forget myself and taken to your music world. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the voice
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
the lyrics are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
understanding and meaningful with fantastic word choice. Adding music to
that is
the
next
level.

I am a keyboard player,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
composing in high school.
Furthermore
, I have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
band of 5
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, play instruments for the church on Sunday services.

Moreover
, this city hosts a competition for young talented youth, looking for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
encouraging us providing sponsorship. For your reference sending one of my composed songs with the letter, hoping you are the person to represent us.

If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
we possess the potentiality to participate in the competition reach us back, looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

When a person is directly addressed, a comma should set off the name: "Thank you, Bala"?
Thank you Bala
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IELTS letter You recently went to concert and thought one of the singers was very good. write a letter to the singer; In your letter say how you feel about performance. give details of your music activates. explain how you would like him to help your with musical activates.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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