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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you WdaW
Hi Sara, How are you? I'm doing great. Recently I went for a temple festival along with my family which I am excited to share with you, as you enjoy this kind of events. Every year, our entire family goes to the native place where we were born and lived for generations and, host a temple function. The highlight of it is that, we build tents using coconut tree leaves, as we must stay inside the temple only. Additionally, cooking also is done there. They organize huge fireworks at night, which makes us feel mesmerized with the colourful lights. I remember our conversation earlier, where you mentioned that you were fascinated watching a similar festival in television. So I thought, you might be interested in this event and enjoy. Moreover, as you are fond of crackers, you will be delighted to participate in such events. Considering these, I would be really ecstatic, if you would accompany me for another similar festival that is about to commence next month. However, I hope that you will be free from you work schedule also and consider this as my personal invite. Your'e welcome to join with your family also. Looking forward to hear back regarding your presence, so that I can make the arrangements soon. Best wishes, Renuka
Hi Sara,

How are you? I'm doing great. Recently I went for a temple festival along with my family which I
am excited
to share with you, as you enjoy this kind of
events
.

Every year, our entire family goes to the native place where we
were born
and
lived
for generations and,
host
a temple function. The highlight of it is that, we build tents using coconut tree
leaves
, as we
must
stay inside the temple
only
.
Additionally
, cooking
also
is done
there. They organize huge fireworks at night, which
makes
us feel mesmerized with the
colourful
lights. I remember our conversation earlier, where you mentioned that you
were fascinated
watching a similar festival in television.
So
I
thought
, you might
be interested
in this
event
and enjoy.
Moreover
, as you are fond of crackers, you will
be delighted
to participate in such
events
.

Considering these, I would be
really
ecstatic, if you would accompany me for another similar festival
that is
about to commence
next
month.
However
, I hope that you will be free from you work schedule
also
and consider this as my personal invite. Your'e welcome to
join
with your family
also
.

Looking forward
to hear
back regarding your presence,
so
that I can
make
the arrangements
soon
. Best wishes,
Renuka
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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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  American English
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214 words
6.0
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