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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work jkaX
Dear Sir or Madam, I saw an advertisement in the local newspaper about a part time job in your museum. I am writing to apply for that unpaid work. I am a student at Historical faculty and I should write an essay about the first World War. This unpaid job will help me to get familiar with most of the actions which were happening at that time. I want to inform you that I have experience working in museums, last summer I did voluntary work at Italian National Museum. In addition, 5 weeks ago I finished a course called "Customer Care". I believe that my new skills will help me to satisfy the visitors of the museum. After 10 days, from 1st of July, I will be available to start my duties. I want to work there about 2 month, moreover I am going to work some weekends as well. Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nver Baghdasaryan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
an advertisement in the local newspaper about a
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part time
job in your museum. I am writing to apply for that unpaid work.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am a student at Historical faculty and I should write an essay about the
first
World War. This unpaid job will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
familiar with most of the actions which were happening at that time.

I want to inform you that I have experience working in museums, last summer I did voluntary work at Italian National Museum.
In addition
, 5 weeks ago I finished a course called
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Customer Care
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
. I believe that my new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to satisfy the visitors of the museum.

After 10 days, from 1st of July, I will be available to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
my duties. I want to work there about 2
Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".
month
,
moreover
I am going to work
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some
weekends
as well
.

Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nver
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Baghdasaryan
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

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8 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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