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You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college jkx1

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have enrolled in short course in your college and I am looking for an accommodation for one month. I am travelling on 15th December Friday and my departure date is 14th January. Basically, I would like to study on paramedics thus I have taken short course for one month in your college. I am staying alone therefor one bedroom flat with kitchen suffice for me. Also, I have to prepare presentation after completing my course. Eargo I need to have good internet facility. I prefer my stay away from city area so I can concentrate on my study. Please provide information on travelling and nearest bus station or train station. If you can help me with transportation map that would be great help. I hope I will get required information before my arrival. Awaiting for your reply. Yours faithfully, Nilam Chauhan

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have enrolled in short course in your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).college, and
college and
 I am looking for Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "accommodation".accommodation
an accommodation
 for one month. I am travelling on 15th December Friday and my departure date is 14th January.

Basically
, I would like to study on paramedics thus
 I have taken short course for one month in your college. I am staying alone therefor It appears that a hyphen is missing.one-bedroom
one bedroom
 flat with kitchen suffice for me. Also
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 prepare presentation after completing my course. Possible spelling mistake found.CargoFargoArgoMargoErgoLargo
Eargo
 I need to have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 internet facility. I prefer my stay away from city area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can concentrate on my study. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 provide information on travelling and nearest bus station or train station. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with transportation map that would be great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. I hope I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 required information This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 my arrival.

Did you mean "awaiting" or "waiting for"?AwaitingWaiting for
Awaiting for
 your reply.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Ni lamNil am
Nilam
 Chauhan