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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her 0YYO
Dear mercy, I hope you are doing well and your family too. Its been a while I heard from you since you moved to Abu Dhabi. I will be hosting a big birthday party for my niece on the 25th of December and i will love for you to attend. This will help us to catch up I really do miss have if you around. The location of the party is opposite Sheraton hotel and its best to use the bridge when coming from your left immediately you enter the city. It is a popular hotel so you can’t miss it. Fun part is you get to stay in my house, there is an empty room just close to mine. It was Sally’s room but she’s moved out after her marriage. You will love it because it has a very big bed and very comfortable. I hope to hear from you see you soon Regards, Faith
Dear mercy, I hope you are doing well and your family too.
Its
been a while I heard from you since you
moved
to Abu Dhabi. I will be hosting a
big
birthday party for my niece on the 25th of December and
i
will
love
for you to attend. This will
help
us to catch up I
really
do miss have if you around. The location of the party is opposite Sheraton hotel and its best to
use
the bridge when coming from your
left
immediately you enter the city. It is a popular hotel
so
you can’t miss it. Fun part is you
get
to stay in my
house
, there is an empty room
just
close to mine. It was Sally’s room
but
she’s
moved
out after her marriage. You will
love
it
because
it has a
very
big
bed and
very
comfortable. I hope to hear from you
see
you
soon
Regards,
Faith
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IELTS letter You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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