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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Dear Sara, I am sorry I have been not writing for such a long time. I am writing to invite you for next Iranian food festival on May. Last week I saw a billboard that show an advertising about especial food festival. It's opening on 12 of May and it takes two days. Everyday has special activity. In the first day, people can taste different food from all part of country. As you know we have a lot of culture in our country and each of them has especial foods. In the second day, people can get around and cooking for each other. I know how much you like to cooking and try new recipe. Besides, in night they plan to have firework. I think it is great and you will enjoy watching firework. I can buy a ticket for you and coming after you and you are welcome always to stay with me. With love, Mari
Dear Sara,

I am sorry I have been not writing for such a long time. I am writing to invite you for
next
Iranian food festival on May.

Last week I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
a billboard that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
an advertising about especial food festival. It's opening on 12 of May and it takes two days.
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
Everyday
has special activity. In the
first
day,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can taste
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
food from all part of country. As you know we have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
culture in our country and each of them has especial foods.

In the second day,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
around and cooking for each other. I know how much you like to cooking and try new recipe.
Besides
, in night they plan to have firework. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it is great and you will enjoy watching firework.

I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a ticket for you and coming after you and you are
The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'welcome'.
welcome always
to stay with me.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
,

Mari

IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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