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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

Dear Mr. Justin, My name is Arshdeep Singh and I am one of your biggest fans. I am writing to express my gratitude regarding your energetic performance at the concert that I really appreciate, especially your vocals and dancing style. Although several singers performed at the concert, but I liked your performance the most. Initially, I was not enjoying the stage because it was hosted by other singers but you turned the stage into moonlight, not only me but also the audience was surprised by your act. Moreover, people were giving you big applause on your dancing style as well. The concert was really helpful for me as I have learned numerous dance steps and the vocal techniques from you. I have keen interest in singing since 2015, in fact I am preparing a song to sing on my cousin’s wedding, sadly I do not have appropriate knowledge of singing techniques. It would be great if you could help me to do better in music and getting the perfect vocals. Hoping for your swift and positive response. Yours sincerely, Arshdeep Singh
Dear Mr. Justin,

My name is
Arshdeep
Singh and
I am one of your biggest fans. I am writing to express my gratitude regarding your energetic performance at the concert that I
really
appreciate,
especially
your vocals and dancing style.

Although several singers performed at the concert,
but
I liked your performance the most.
Initially
, I was not enjoying the stage
because
it
was hosted
by other singers
but
you turned the stage into moonlight, not
only
me
but
also
the audience
was surprised
by your act.
Moreover
,
people
were giving you
big
applause on your dancing style
as well
.

The concert was
really
helpful for me as I have learned numerous dance steps and the vocal techniques from you. I have keen interest in singing since 2015, in fact I am preparing a song to sing on my cousin’s wedding,
sadly
I do not have appropriate knowledge of singing techniques. It would be great if you could
help
me to do better in music and getting the perfect vocals.

Hoping for your swift and
positive
response.

Yours
sincerely
,

Arshdeep
Singh
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IELTS letter You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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