Dear Mr. Justin,
My name is Arshdeep Singh and I am one of your biggest fans. I am writing to express my gratitude regarding your energetic performance at the concert that I really appreciate, especially your vocals and dancing style.
Although several singers performed at the concert, but I liked your performance the most. Initially, I was not enjoying the stage because it was hosted by other singers but you turned the stage into moonlight, not only me but also the audience was surprised by your act. Moreover, people were giving you big applause on your dancing style as well.
The concert was really helpful for me as I have learned numerous dance steps and the vocal techniques from you. I have keen interest in singing since 2015, in fact I am preparing a song to sing on my cousin’s wedding, sadly I do not have appropriate knowledge of singing techniques. It would be great if you could help me to do better in music and getting the perfect vocals.
Hoping for your swift and positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Arshdeep Singh
Dear Mr. Justin,
My name is  
Arshdeep
  Singh and
 I am one of your biggest fans. I am writing to express my gratitude regarding your energetic performance at the concert that I  
really
 appreciate,  
especially
 your vocals and dancing style.
Although several singers performed at the concert,  
but
 I liked your performance the most.  
Initially
, I was not enjoying the stage  
because
 it  
was hosted
 by other singers  
but
 you turned the stage into moonlight, not  
only
 me  
but
  also
 the audience  
was surprised
 by your act.  
Moreover
,  
people
 were giving you  
big
 applause on your dancing style  
as well
.
The concert was  
really
 helpful for me as I have learned numerous dance steps and the vocal techniques from you. I have keen interest in singing since 2015, in fact I am preparing a song to sing on my cousin’s wedding,  
sadly
 I do not have appropriate knowledge of singing techniques. It would be great if you could  
help
 me to do better in music and getting the perfect vocals.
Hoping for your swift and  
positive
 response.
Yours  
sincerely
, 
Arshdeep
 Singh