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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. you want to tell him how you feel. write a letter to the singer. in your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities. explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. you want to tell him how you feel. write a letter to the singer. in your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities. explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities. KRA3

Dear Maam, Hope you are doing good. This Saturday I got a chance to visit the concert name - Band 4 in New Delhi. I enjoyed that evening with my friends and was completely lost in that environment. I have attended all the 3 shows but could resist myself and start dancing when you presented the music. It was amazing and I was completely captivated by the music. It was so fascinating that at the end of each song, I started shouting 'once more' so loudly, everyone in the audience was looking at me. Maybe you have also noticed me. I am learning some filmy songs on guitar. Presently I have completed the basics and got control of the notes, tones, rhythms, and chords. You were playing it so well during your stage show that it's inspired me. It's my dream now to learn from and play like you if possible. Please let me know if you can teach me. Every week I am posting my videos playing few songs on guitar. It would be my pleasure if you can review it and let me know my faults and guide me where I am wrong. Will appreciate your time and effort for the same. Regards, Jaya

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