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You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter introduce yourself say what skills and work experience you have explain the sort of job you are looking for You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter introduce yourself say what skills and work experience you have explain the sort of job you are looking for You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, O9kE
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to register myself with your job hunt team for a part-time position. I am an international student from India, and according to the government guidelines, I can work only 20 hours per week during study permit. I have food chain, restaurants, and coffee shops, experience and at my last workplace, Tim Hortons, I worked as a Cashier and baker. Furthermore, I have food quality assurance technician experience, so I can do raw and finish product evaluation, chemical titration and help customers with any queries regarding food/ finish products. I am extremely interested in restaurants and chemistry-related jobs which can add extra skills to my resume. In addition to this, I will be happy to take any position where I can interact with people face to face owing to the fact it will help me to improve my communication skills. Please feel free to contact, if you need further information. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you, Dane Adam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to register myself with your job hunt team for a part-time position. I am an international student from India, and according to the
government
guidelines, I can work
only
20 hours per week during study permit.

I
have food chain, restaurants, and coffee shops, experience and at my last workplace, Tim Hortons, I worked as a Cashier and baker.
Furthermore
, I have food quality assurance technician experience,
so
I can do raw and finish product evaluation, chemical titration and
help
customers with any queries regarding food/ finish products.

I am
extremely
interested in restaurants and chemistry-related jobs which can
add
extra
skills
to my resume.
In addition
to this, I will be happy to take any position where I can interact with
people
face to face owing to the fact it will
help
me to
improve
my communication
skills
.

Please
feel free to contact, if you need
further
information.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thank you,

Dane Adam
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IELTS letter You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter introduce yourself say what skills and work experience you have explain the sort of job you are looking for You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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