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A friend who looking for a Part time job to support his studies.

A friend who looking for a Part time job to support his studies. qYWX
Dear Saiful Hope you and your family all are doing well, I am pleased to advice you that, i have got a part-time job for you, which is a big opportunity to support your studies. Let me explain, yesterday I met up with our school friend kamrul, he starting restaurant business which is very famous nowadays in our city, he looking for a part-time delivery boy, when i mentioned you looking for a part-time job, he was thrilled to hear that and he want contact with you for this job, this job is from 6pm to 10pm and 2000/= per monthly salary, it might be good if you join there. I hope this opportunity will be best for you, you should contact with kamrul if you are interested in the job. Contact number is 063363 Your lovingly Mahmid
Dear
Saiful


Hope you and your family all are doing well, I am
pleased
to advice you that,
i
have
got
a part-time
job
for you, which is a
big
opportunity to support your studies.

Let
me
explain
, yesterday I met up with our school friend
kamrul
,
he starting
restaurant business which is
very
famous
nowadays in our city,
he looking
for a part-time delivery boy, when
i
mentioned you looking for a part-time
job
, he
was thrilled
to hear
that and
he
want
contact with you for this
job
, this
job
is from 6pm to 10pm and 2000/= per monthly salary, it might be
good
if you
join
there.

I hope this opportunity will be best for you, you should contact with
kamrul
if you
are interested
in the
job
. Contact number is 063363

Your
lovingly


Mahmid
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IELTS letter A friend who looking for a Part time job to support his studies.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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