Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. mNMr
Dear Mr. Mathew, I am writing to explain my position about my part-time Computer science course. Presently, there is a significant increase in my work allocation from past month, and it is holding back my focus from my evening classes. As the financial year approaching, I have been assigned with a lot of critical deliveries. Addition to that, I have to guide the team to complete certification of the projects holding accomplished status. Because of this increased work duties, I am finding it difficult to focus for the evening classes. Not just keeping my focus on studies, I am find it difficult to get evening time for the classes as it is clashing with my evening client tag-up meetings. This has led to huge scare of time and unable to keep my undivided focus to studies. As I am unable to do justice with my part time studies, I would request a month leave and try to make-up for the missed classes and pending assignments in the next month after I resume. It is my humble request you to consider my leave proposal. I will look forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely, Mike
Dear Mr. Mathew,

I am writing to
explain
my position about my part-time Computer science course.

Presently
, there is a significant increase in my work allocation from past month, and it is holding back my
focus
from my evening
classes
. As the financial year approaching, I have
been assigned
with
a lot of
critical deliveries. Addition to that, I
have to
guide the team to complete certification of the projects holding accomplished status.

Because of this
increased work duties, I am finding it difficult to
focus
for the evening
classes
. Not
just
keeping my
focus
on studies, I am find it difficult to
get
evening time for the
classes
as it is clashing with my evening client tag-up meetings. This has led to huge scare of time and unable to
keep
my undivided
focus
to studies.

As I am unable to do justice with my
part time
studies, I would request a month
leave
and try to
make
-up for the missed
classes
and pending assignments in the
next
month after I resume.

It is my humble request you to consider my
leave
proposal. I will look forward
to hear
from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Mike
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts