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I am writing to inform you that I cannot continue the Charted Accountants evening course.

I am writing to inform you that I cannot continue the Charted Accountants evening course. qYYG
Dear Mr. Smith, Hope this finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I cannot continue the Charted Accountants evening course. As you know, I have full time job, and recently have been promoted from accountant position to take place senior accountant's place. This promotion affected greatly my free time, as now I am incharged of financial and tax reporting at the company. The end of a fiscal year is coming and I have to work over time almost every day. So, I am no longer able to do the evening course. I heard from other students that there will additional course in March. Will appriciate if you can withdraw me from current course and inroll me in one starts in March. Hopefully, I will have more free time then. Please let me know your decision. Looking forward tto hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Alina Alfandi
Dear Mr. Smith,

Hope this finds you well.

I am writing to inform you that I cannot continue the Charted Accountants evening course.

As you know, I have full
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time
job, and recently have
been promoted
from accountant position to take place senior accountant's place.

This promotion
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affected
greatly
my free
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time
, as
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now
I am
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incharged
of financial and tax reporting at the
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company
.

The
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end
of a fiscal year is coming and I
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have to
work over
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time
almost every day.
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So
, I am no longer able to do the evening course.

I heard from other students that there will additional course in March. Will
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appriciate
if you can withdraw me from
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current
course and
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inroll
me in one
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starts
in March.
Hopefully
, I will have more free
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time
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then
.

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Please
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let
me know your decision. Looking forward
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tto
hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Alina
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Alfandi

IELTS letter I am writing to inform you that I cannot continue the Charted Accountants evening course.

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  American English
10 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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