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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. v.2

Dear Alex, Yesterday, I went to a musical concert by Shakira in Miami with my friends. Along with Shakira, Justin Bieber, and Shawn Mendes performed as well. Everybody was on their feet. The performances were astonishing by all the artists. However, personally, I enjoyed Shawn's songs the most. The crowd was close to ten thousand people. There were expensive drinks, cuisines, and desserts. Everyone had the best time of their lives. Regarding the performance of Justin, I would say teen girls were excited the most followed by young women. Shakira summoned demons by her magical voice. The crowd was in awe by her spell. No doubt, she has a magnificent personality, and her beauty compliments it. Shawn Mendes has grown up and his voice had a new magical effect on the audience. People were shouting, dancing, and jumping on the beats of his songs. Now, I am out of words, and I wish you were there with us as well. However, next time I will take you with me. Take care of yourself. Yours faithfully, Faseeh
Dear Alex,

Yesterday, I went to a musical concert by Shakira in Miami with my friends. Along with Shakira, Justin Bieber, and Shawn Mendes performed
as well
. Everybody was on their feet. The performances were astonishing by all the artists.
However
,
personally
, I enjoyed Shawn's songs the most. The crowd was close to ten thousand
people
. There were expensive drinks, cuisines, and desserts. Everyone had the best time of their
lives
.

Regarding the performance of Justin, I would say teen girls
were excited
the most followed by young women. Shakira summoned demons by her magical voice. The crowd was in awe by her spell. No doubt, she has a magnificent personality, and her beauty compliments it. Shawn Mendes has grown up and his voice had a new magical effect on the audience.
People
were shouting, dancing, and jumping on the beats of his songs.

Now
, I am out of words, and I wish you were there with us
as well
.
However
,
next
time I will take you with me. Take care of yourself.

Yours
faithfully
,
Faseeh
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IELTS letter You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. v. 2

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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