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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear sir or madam, I am writing to you because my plans about the renting of the apartment have just changed. The thing is that I applied for a job and have just received a job offer in this company which is located in another city. Thus, I will not have the possibility to commute to the new office from this apartment because it is far from there. Unfortunately, I have to leave this place despite all the facilities it provides. As soon as I return I will ask you to find me an appropriate apartment but it could happen no sooner than a new year comes. Once it happens, I will ask my warden to revise my office location to be close to your apartment. I hope this will not cause you any difficulties. Sincerely, Mityushkin Evgeniy

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my plans about the renting of the apartment have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. The thing is that I applied for a job and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 received a job offer in this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 which is located
 in another city.

Thus
, I will not have the possibility to commute to the new office from this apartment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is far from there. Unfortunately, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 this place despite all the facilities it provides.

As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I return I will ask you to find me an appropriate apartment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it could happen no sooner than a new year This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
. Once it happens, I will ask my warden to revise my office location to be close to your apartment.

I hope this will not cause you any difficulties.

Sincerely
,

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Mityushkin
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Evgeniy