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You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: – Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. – Polite. No one responds to insults. – Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? – Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction towards the insult I felt when I was in your restaurant accompanied with my friends for a formal dinner. I had done a booking for 4 members on 26thDecember that is three days ahead for 7. 00 clock dinner. To my surprise when I reached your hotel all the employers are in gangs and making jokes of each other. They are not ready to even enquire who we are, when we took initiative and asked for the manager they responded that they are not aware about such manager We are wondering what type of restaurant you are running and took an immediate decision and moved out from that place. We found it was a great insult to us as well as for you that we could not forgive for any reason. While I made reservation, I had paid for unlimited non-vegetarian buffet and I want to reimburse the amount from you at the earliest. I am not ready for any type of compromise or swap of lunch from your side. I look forward to receiving your response at the earliest.
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction towards the insult I felt when I was in your restaurant
accompanied with
my friends for a formal dinner.

I had done a booking for 4 members on 26thDecember
that is
three days ahead for 7. 00 clock dinner. To my surprise when I reached your hotel all the employers are in gangs and making jokes of each other. They are not ready to even
enquire
who we are, when we took initiative and
asked for
the manager they responded that they are not aware about such
manager


We are wondering what type of restaurant you are running and took an immediate decision and
moved
out from that place. We found it was a great insult to us
as well
as for you that we could not forgive for any reason.

While I made reservation, I had paid for unlimited non-vegetarian buffet and I want to reimburse the amount from you at the earliest. I am not ready for any type of compromise or swap of lunch from your side.

I look forward to receiving your response at the earliest.
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IELTS letter You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: – Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. – Polite. No one responds to insults. – Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? – Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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