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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter: Say how you heard about the plan Explain how you feel about it Ask for more information about it

Dear Sir, I am writing to bring your attention to the proposed / upcoming shopping centre in Model Town, Delhi. Yesterday, I was reading a local newspaper and it had a piece of news about this company’s upcoming project plan. It was mentioned that it is building a three-story shopping complex wherein discrete renounced brands will also have the stores. I am delighted that such a shopping mall is soon going to be built in my vicinity. Locals of my area were facing a huge problem because of the unavailability of such a shopping complex. Although there are such stores in Delhi, they are very far from our place and reaching there is painful due to heavy traffic on the city roads. Such a development will be a big relief and time-saving for all of us. I am curious to know whether this complex will have parking facilities. Right now, we do not have any dedicated area for parking vehicles and I am assuming once this complex will be operational, people will seek the parking within the complex. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Viral Korat

Dear Sir,

I am writing to bring your attention to the proposed / upcoming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
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centre
 in Model Town, Delhi. Yesterday, I was reading a local Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).newspaper, and
newspaper and
 it had a piece of news about this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s upcoming project plan. It was mentioned
 that it is building a three-story You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicatedconvoluted
complex
 wherein discrete renounced brands will also
 have the stores.

I am delighted
 that such a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 mall is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 going to be built
 in my vicinity. Locals of my area were facing a huge problem This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the unavailability of such a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicatedconvoluted
complex
. Although there are such stores in Delhi, they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 far from our place and reaching there is painful due to heavy traffic on the city roads. Such a development will be a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 relief and time-saving for all of us.

I am curious to know whether this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicatedconvoluted
complex
 will have parking facilities. Right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, we do not have any dedicated area for parking Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).vehicles, and
vehicles and
 I am assuming once this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicatedconvoluted
complex
 will be operational, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will seek the parking within the complex.

I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully
, Viral Possible spelling mistake found.KoranKaratBorat
Korat