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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Dear Parth, Thank youso much for doing house-sit while i am away from my home. You can contact me anytime if yoy need any information. i always keep my mobile with me so, please ring me on my number. if my phone id not reachable you can also call 382302 which is my hotel number. I m staying at imperial hotel in surat. I would like you to take care of my cat. So, please give handful of cat biscuit twice a day. moreover, put fresh water daily in her bowl. Cat biscuit are there in the kitchen top o the fridge. If you are feeling hot please do not forget to turn off heater. The switch is near the backdoor covered with a small wooden door. you can also open the windows with the keys but dont forget to close it when you go outside. I also want you to put water in my plant's. Outside plants need to be watered only once in two days. I hope to see you soon. Yours, Krishna
Dear
Parth
,

Thank
youso
much for doing
house
-sit while
i
am away from my home.

You can contact me anytime if
yoy
need any information.
i
always
keep
my mobile with me
so
,
please
ring me on my number.
if
my phone id not reachable you can
also
call 382302 which is my hotel number.
I m
staying at imperial hotel in
surat
.

I would like you to take care of my cat.
So
,
please
give
handful of
cat biscuit twice a day.
moreover
, put fresh water daily in her bowl. Cat biscuit are there in the kitchen top o the fridge.

If
you are feeling hot
please
do not forget to turn off heater. The switch is near the backdoor covered with a
small
wooden door.
you
can
also
open the windows with the keys
but
dont
forget to close it when you go outside. I
also
want you to put water in my plant's. Outside plants need to
be watered
only
once in two days.

I hope to
see
you
soon
.

Yours,

Krishna
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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