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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Dear Parth, Thank youso much for doing house-sit while i am away from my home. You can contact me anytime if yoy need any information. i always keep my mobile with me so, please ring me on my number. if my phone id not reachable you can also call 382302 which is my hotel number. I m staying at imperial hotel in surat. I would like you to take care of my cat. So, please give handful of cat biscuit twice a day. moreover, put fresh water daily in her bowl. Cat biscuit are there in the kitchen top o the fridge. If you are feeling hot please do not forget to turn off heater. The switch is near the backdoor covered with a small wooden door. you can also open the windows with the keys but dont forget to close it when you go outside. I also want you to put water in my plant's. Outside plants need to be watered only once in two days. I hope to see you soon. Yours, Krishna
Dear
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Parth
,

Thank
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youso
much for doing
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house
-sit while
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am away from my home.

You can contact me anytime if
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yoy
need any information.
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i
always
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keep
my mobile with me
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so
,
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please
ring me on my number.
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if
my phone id not reachable you can
also
call 382302 which is my hotel number.
It seems that an apostrophe is missing. Did you mean “I’m”?
I m
staying at imperial hotel in
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surat
.

I would like you to take care of my cat.
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So
,
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please
give
It seems that an article is missing. Did you mean “the handful of” or “a handful of”?
handful of
cat biscuit twice a day.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
moreover
, put fresh water daily in her bowl. Cat biscuit are there in the kitchen top o the fridge.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you are feeling hot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do not forget to turn off heater. The switch is near the backdoor covered with a
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small
wooden door.
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you
can
also
open the windows with the keys
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but
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dont
forget to close it when you go outside. I
also
want you to put water in my plant's. Outside plants need to
be watered
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
once in two days.

I hope to
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see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours,

Krishna

IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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