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You have been invited by your colleague to his farewell party. You are not able to attend the party, write a letter to friend explain the situation, say why you are not attending, say something about the period you have worked together.

You have been invited by your colleague to his farewell party. You are not able to attend the party, write a letter to friend explain the situation, say why you are not attending, say something about the period you have worked together. KJ90
Dear Anita, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit. firstly I hope for your golden career and got shocked on your farewell invitation. Thanks for invitation but, I have to go hospital for bodycheckup of my grand father on the same date and time as provided by you so unfortunately I will not join your party to see off you. But I will plan to visit you personally when you free. I am going to miss you as we spent more than 5 year together on our project. We done lots of successful seminars and fruitfull meeting for our department. Morover I am not forgot your favor in my touch situation and now I am alone without you but I wish for bright future. I hope you enjoy fullest in party with all other colleague and have a bright future ahead! Your lovingly, Anushree
Dear Anita,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit.
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firstly
I hope for your golden career and
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got
shocked on your farewell invitation.

Thanks for invitation
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but
, I
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have to
go hospital for
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bodycheckup
of my grand father on the same date and time as provided by you
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so
unfortunately I will not
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join
your party to
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see
off you.
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But
I will plan to visit you
personally
when you free.

I am going to miss you as we spent more than 5 year together on our project. We
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done
lots of successful seminars and
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fruitfull
meeting for our department.
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Morover
I am not
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forgot
your favor in my touch situation and
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now
I am alone without you
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but
I wish for bright future.

I hope you enjoy fullest in party with all other colleague and have a bright future ahead!

Your
lovingly
,

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Anushree

IELTS letter You have been invited by your colleague to his farewell party. You are not able to attend the party, write a letter to friend explain the situation, say why you are not attending, say something about the period you have worked together.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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