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Some people prefer to live in a large city and others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in?

Some people prefer to live in a large city and others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? dDmMo
Deciding where to live is one of life's most difficult choices. One may opt for life in a small town or large city. In my opinion, life in a small town is more beneficial and enjoyable. This is due to the fact that small towns offer better health. As we all know in this 21st century health has become our prime issue. Due to the corona pandemic, we use to know health is everything. Small towns provide good health. Fresh vegetables and food products are rare in cities but in small towns they are easy to find and access. The quality of life and health index are both good in the countryside. Where city’s residents were dying because of corona, there were small town’s people who were maintaining their health and their mortality rate was very less. Undeniably, one of the many benefits of living in a small town is the sense of the community people can find there. Familiarity with the locals develops over time, and people may find themselves becoming much more involved in the community than you might expect. Though cities are filled with people, it can often be hard to develop lasting connections, as the pace of life in cities is quite fast. In smaller towns people may have less anonymity, and therefore a reduced sense of loneliness. From a health point of view, small towns are better than cities. Due to reduced traffic, and therefore reduced air pollution, everyone can treat their lungs to beautiful fresh air in a small town. There is also significantly less light pollution, so people can even spend their night star-gazing at the beautiful night sky!
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or large city. In my opinion,
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is more beneficial and enjoyable.
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offer better health.

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we all know in this 21st century
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has become our prime issue. Due to the corona pandemic, we
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use to
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is everything.
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provide
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. Fresh vegetables and food products are rare in
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in
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they are easy to find and access. The quality of
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and
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index are both
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in the countryside. Where city’s residents were dying
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who were maintaining their
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and their mortality rate was
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benefits of living in a
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is the sense of the community
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can find there. Familiarity with the locals develops over time, and
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may find themselves becoming much more involved in the community than you might
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. Though
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, it can
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to develop lasting connections, as the pace of
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is quite
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. In smaller
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are better than
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. Due to
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traffic, and
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air pollution, everyone can treat their lungs to
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fresh air in a
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can even spend their night star-gazing at the
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IELTS letter Some people prefer to live in a large city and others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in?

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