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say what the participant liked about the hotels. why there were unhappy about the food. suggest what the manager should do in the future

say what the participant liked about the hotels. why there were unhappy about the food. suggest what the manager should do in the future 6pDX3
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with reference to the meeting room which I booked on behalf of the IT solution department. The conference was held last Sunday, on January 15th, at your hotel. First of all, I must mention that my colleagues and I were impressed by the professionalism of the hotel, including hygiene and cleanliness, great customer service, a large lounge area, and high-speed internet service. Furthermore, we also appreciated that the conference hall was well equipped with the latest technological amenities and spacious-comfortable seats. However, when it comes to the food, the cuisine was mediocre at best. Not only were the meat and rice undercooked, but the other dishes were also too salty to the extent that some of us suffered later stomachaches. Even worse, the appetizers and desserts were insufficient to serve all of us. Accordingly, if I may suggest improving the conditions for future meetings, more serving staff should be employed during important conferences. Moreover, it might be wise to retrain the chef and ensure that top-quality and fresh ingredients are used. If you want to discuss this matter further, please feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Kyrillos Gamal
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with reference to the meeting room which I booked on behalf of the IT solution department. The conference
was held
last Sunday, on January 15th, at your hotel.

First of all
, I
must
mention that my colleagues and I
were impressed
by the professionalism of the hotel, including hygiene and cleanliness, great customer service, a large lounge area, and high-speed internet service.
Furthermore
, we
also
appreciated that the conference hall was
well equipped
with the latest technological amenities and spacious-comfortable seats.

However
, when it
comes
to the food, the cuisine was mediocre at best. Not
only
were the meat and rice
undercooked
,
but
the other dishes were
also
too salty to the extent that
some
of us suffered later stomachaches. Even worse, the appetizers and desserts were insufficient to serve all of us.

Accordingly
, if I may suggest improving the conditions for future meetings, more serving staff should
be employed
during
important
conferences.
Moreover
, it might be wise to retrain the chef and ensure that top-quality and fresh ingredients are
used
.

If you want to discuss this matter
further
,
please
feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kyrillos
Gamal
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IELTS letter say what the participant liked about the hotels. why there were unhappy about the food. suggest what the manager should do in the future

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