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You are working from home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job

You are working from home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job OEqNG
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to you to express my concern of malfunctioning of the laptop keyboard which I have purchased last month. I unable to do my work at utmost speed because of various alphabet and numeric key are not working, so I must use the digital on-screen keyboard instead. Apart from this its very difficult to type through on screen keyboard where physical keys are not working. It is slowing down my working efficiency and speed of my work. I am aware that I am bound with 1 year replacement warranty of the laptop keyboard. And I want you to replace my laptop keyboard as early as possible. I will be very thankful to you. Your Faithfully Baljit Singh
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to you to express my concern of malfunctioning of the laptop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keyboard
which I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
last month.

Did you mean "I am" or "I was"?
I
unable to do my work at utmost speed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of various alphabet and numeric key are not working,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the digital on-screen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keyboard
instead
. Apart from this its
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult to type through on screen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keyboard
where physical keys are not working. It is slowing down my working efficiency and speed of my work.

I am aware that I
am bound
with 1 year replacement warranty of the laptop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keyboard
. And I want you to replace my laptop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keyboard
as early as possible. I will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
thankful to you.

Your
Faithfully


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Baljit
Singh
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IELTS letter You are working from home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
122 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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