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Today more and more tourists are visting places where conditions are difficult , such as sahara desert and artarctica.

Today more and more tourists are visting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert and artarctica. wm133
Now a days it is in trend in tourists to explore places with more challenges and extreme weather conditions i. e. , Tourist places like Sahara and Antarctica. They want to stretch their abilities and want thriller at the same time. In this essay we will shed light on both pros and cons of exploring challenging places like these. To start with the advantages of range over in extreme weather conditions, like deserts, and antarctica is it helps to push people abilities to do something beyond their capabilities. People could learn about various distinct environment conditions. Moreover, it gives immense knowledge about the geographical condition of the country. Visiting such places and knowing about the specialities and climate may add an experience in explorers’ life. On the other hand, visiting places with extreme difficult environment situation could be of great challenges. Locations such as Sahara deserts where conditions are immensely extreme, with low humidity and high temperature, one needs to spare extra space in their bags to carry equipment’s and plenty of water for the survival. This may also lower down the thrill and enthusiasm of exploring tourism places. Apart from this, it is unfavourable to explore these places with the family because this need one to be very strong, physically & psychologically. In conclusion exploring extreme places can add thrill, knowledge, and adventure. But also demands people to be strong and be ready for the any unwanted welcoming situations here.
Now a days
it is in trend in tourists to explore
places
with more challenges and
extreme
weather conditions
i. e.
,
Tourist
places
like Sahara
and Antarctica. They want to stretch their abilities and want thriller at the same time. In this essay we will shed light on both pros and cons of exploring challenging
places
like these.

To
start
with the advantages of range over in
extreme
weather conditions, like deserts, and
antarctica
is it
helps
to push
people
abilities to do something beyond their capabilities.
People
could learn about various distinct environment conditions.
Moreover
, it gives immense knowledge about the geographical
condition
of the country. Visiting such
places
and knowing about the specialities and climate may
add
an experience in explorers’ life.

On the other hand
, visiting
places
with
extreme
difficult environment situation could be of great challenges. Locations such as Sahara deserts where conditions are
immensely
extreme
, with low humidity and high temperature, one needs to spare extra space in their bags to carry equipment’s and
plenty
of water for the survival. This may
also
lower down the thrill and enthusiasm of exploring tourism
places
. Apart from this, it is
unfavourable
to explore these
places
with the family
because
this need one to be
very
strong,
physically
&
psychologically
.

In conclusion
exploring
extreme
places
can
add
thrill, knowledge, and adventure.
But
also
demands
people
to be strong and be ready for the any unwanted welcoming situations here.
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