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You are about to start social meeting in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper

You are about to start social meeting in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper pqp9
I am Sai, the president of the local People’s Friend Club. Our Club is organizing seminars in which delegates from different countries will take part. We would be very thankful to you if you would give adequate space, about our activities, in the columns of your esteemed daily, so that we get the maximum participation and support of local people. We shall be touching various social issues in our meetings. Besides the cultural exchange, which is given at a forum like this, we would also be pondering over concerns like environmental pollution. Not only this, given the recent scare of the Corona Virus, we would also discuss the manner in which people can deal with such events and can better equip themselves for the future. The first meeting is on 10th April 2020. The venue is Club Melbourne and the theme is 'Social issues and the impact on society. ' We would look forward to your presence in this discussion. Thanking you for your support. Yours faithfully, Rahul Gupta
I am
Sai
, the president of the local
People
’s Friend Club. Our Club is organizing seminars in which delegates from
different
countries will
take part
. We would be
very
thankful to you if you would give adequate space, about our activities, in the columns of your esteemed daily,
so
that we
get
the maximum participation and support of local
people
.

We shall be touching various social issues in our meetings.
Besides
the cultural exchange, which is
given
at a forum like this, we would
also
be pondering over concerns like environmental pollution. Not
only
this,
given
the recent scare of the
Corona Virus
, we would
also
discuss the manner in which
people
can deal with such
events
and can better equip themselves for the future.

The
first
meeting is on 10th April 2020. The venue is Club Melbourne and the theme is 'Social issues and the impact on society. ' We would look forward to your presence in this discussion.

Thanking you for your support.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rahul Gupta
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IELTS letter You are about to start social meeting in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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