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You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city POKj
Dear Mansi, It has been a long time since we were in touch. I hope all is well. I am writing to inform you that I will be travelling to Singapore in June. As I remember we last meet during our colledge days. After graduation I have been working in Accenture Pvt ltd in Banglore as a Java developer. Previously as you know I was staying in Mumbai but now I have relocated to Banglore. I would be travelling to singapore for an official exhibition of cars which has been organized by a club which I am part of. The exhibition will be for 2 days and I will be managing the event and also will be a anchor for the event. I would also like to visit the Botanical garden when I am in singapore. I have also listed down few places to visit, which are popular tourist attractions I appreciate if you could suggest any place for shopping in singapore. Hope to see you soon when I am in Singapore. Regards, sakshi
Dear
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Mansi
,

It has been a long time since we were in touch. I hope all is well. I am writing to inform you that I will be travelling to Singapore in June.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I remember we last
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
during our
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colledge
days. After
The comma is probably missing here: "graduation, I".
graduation I
have been working in Accenture Pvt ltd in
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Banglore
as a Java developer. Previously as you know I was staying in Mumbai
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I have relocated to
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Banglore
.

I would be travelling to
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singapore
for an official exhibition of cars which has
been organized
by a club which I am part of. The exhibition will be for 2 days and I will be managing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and
also
will be
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
anchor for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
.

I would
also
like to visit the Botanical garden when I am in
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singapore
. I have
also
listed down few places to visit, which are popular tourist attractions

I appreciate if you could suggest any place for shopping in
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singapore
.

Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
when I am in Singapore.

Regards,

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sakshi

IELTS letter You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

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173 words
6.0
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