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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear LOM3
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing a letter to request a new student identification card as I lost it last week. Losing student card affects my daily life deeply. As the submission deadline of my essay is next Friday, it is necessary for me to look for the information from the library. However, I cannot enter the school library and borrow book without the card. As a result, I asked my classmate to help and borrow books for me. I also went to the public library which is 1 hour driving distance from my apartment. It took me a lot of time. I am worried that I do not have enough time to finish my essay and it probably affects my result. Because of this reason, I would like to apply for a new card. I understand that it takes a period of time to reissue the card. Can you please send me the price and payment method? I would be grateful if you can provide a receipt that I can show to the librarian before getting the new card. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Laura Bush
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing a letter to request a new student identification
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
as I lost it last week.

Losing student
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
affects my daily life
deeply
. As the submission deadline of my essay is
next
Friday, it is necessary for me to look for the information from the library.
However
, I cannot enter the school library and borrow book without the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
.
As a result
, I asked my classmate to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and borrow books for me. I
also
went to the public library which is 1 hour driving distance from my apartment. It took me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
time. I
am worried
that I do not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time to finish my essay and it
probably
affects my result.

Because of this
reason, I would like to apply for a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
. I understand that it takes a period of time to reissue the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
. Can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the price and payment method? I would be grateful if you can provide a receipt that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
to the librarian
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
getting the new card.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

Laura Bush
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IELTS letter You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words