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Write a letter to your manager about your work from the last year.Include what you did? What you think you could improve? A training request.

Write a letter to your manager about your work from the last year. Include what you did? What you think you could improve? A training request. NJb0

Dear Sir, I am writing to summarise my work that I have been doing since last one year after being associated with your firm. Although I m delighted to be a part of such a reputed organisation. First and the foremost, I would like to introduce my work that is to handle or assist the technical issues like the malfunctioning of any system, any fault etc. as the Technical Assistant. I find this work not only interesting but knowledgeable also however I am not much experienced. I used to perform my duties in a well and organised way under the guidance of my Incharge as he is a very talented and skilled person. Another thing is the scope of improvement and after analysing my work I think I could improve a lot as this field requires a great skillfull strategy. Keeping all these things I discovered a few areas to be improved like: proper identification of system parts, manufacturing defect recognition along with the easy repairing tips etc. Finally, I would like to request you to arrange a training session to sharpen our technical skills so that our work would be up to the mark and fulfilling. Such training would prove a positive step towards the employees as well as company's enlargement Thank you for your consideration of my letter. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Rohan

Dear Sir,

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Thank you for your consideration of my letter. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely
,

Rohan