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IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1: You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job AD7w
Dear Sir, Recently I came across an adverb considering a global training course on psychology management which is quite valuable in our field. Personally, I would be extremely grateful if you could give me the authority and time to attend the course. As described above, it is about how psychology influences and changes drastically the perception of ordinary people in view of advertisements surrounding everyday products. Consequently, our company could be of important help allowing me to take part in that particular session. Maybe you as the manager as well as the head of my department could enlighten the responsible members of the committee in order to provide me with one week license in order to be part of the coursse. Also, I must underline the benefits the company will gain from me attending the course. Learning and exploring psychological factors of our industry will definitely benefit us in achieving our commercial goals, moreover, will enhance our chances of delivering stronger advertisements to our demanding clients. Again, I would appreciate your consideration on the matter, along with your immediate reply. Yours sincerely, Lily Thomson
Dear Sir, Recently I came across an adverb considering a global training course on psychology management which is quite valuable in our field.

Personally
, I would be
extremely
grateful if you could give me the authority and time to attend the course. As
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
described
above, it is about how psychology influences and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
drastically
the perception of ordinary
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people
in view of advertisements surrounding everyday products.

Consequently
, our
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company
could be of
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important
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help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to allow" or "allow".
allowing
me to
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take part
in that particular session. Maybe you as the manager
as well
as the head of my department could enlighten the responsible members of the committee in order to provide me with one week license in order to be part of the
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coursse
.

Also
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
underline the benefits the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
will gain from me attending the course. Learning and exploring psychological factors of our industry will definitely benefit us in achieving our commercial goals,
moreover
, will enhance our chances of delivering stronger advertisements to our demanding clients.

Again, I would appreciate your consideration on the matter, along with your immediate reply.

Yours
sincerely
, Lily Thomson
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IELTS letter IELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1: You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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