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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties 658G
Dear Friend, I hope you are doing well and safe. It has been weeks we did not meet. I want to ask a favor from you. I am going on staycation and no one is staying at home. Therefore, I am asking if you don't mind if you can look after my house once a day in addition to my cat and dog which obviously I cannot take them with me. I have kept my pet's food under the sink in the kitchen and you have to just put it in the bowl once in the morning along with water. In addition, I want you to check on my electrical appliances that they are switched off except for the fridge to make sure the food i kept are in good state. I really want to thank you in advance for this help and I owe you one in future. Please if you had any clarifications when I am away, don't hesitate to contact me on my mobile as it is always reachable. Take care and best regards, Nader Nakouzi
Dear Friend,

I hope you are doing well and safe. It has been weeks we did not
meet
.

I want to ask a favor from you. I am going on
staycation
and no one is staying at home.
Therefore
, I am asking if you don't mind if you can look after my
house
once a day
in addition
to my cat and dog which
obviously
I cannot take them with me. I have
kept
my pet's food under the sink in the kitchen and you
have to
just
put it in the bowl once in the morning along with water.
In addition
, I want you to
check
on my electrical appliances that they
are switched
off
except for
the fridge to
make
sure the food
i
kept
are in
good
state.

I
really
want to thank you in advance for this
help
and I owe you one
in future
.
Please
if you had any clarifications when I am away, don't hesitate to contact me on my mobile as it is always reachable.

Take care and best regards, Nader
Nakouzi
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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