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you have just spend a week with a friend on holiday. when you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.

you have just spend a week with a friend on holiday. when you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. R3Ep
Dear Reza, Let me first thank you for your great support last week. The time I spend with you was just amazing. It will be always remembered in my whole life. I must say you are one of the best chef ever I seen in my life. Thank you again for entertaining me with some of the best food you cooked for me. I will surely never the chance to visit your home in my next vacation. Yesterday, I landed in my home town. It was a long haul flight. I forgot to bring my wallet back from your home, you will find it just beside the television. There is no money in my wallet except my office ID card and some visiting cards. It will be great help if you can ship me back my wallet as soon as possible as it is mandatory for me to bring the ID card at office time. You will find the shipping address printed just on the back side of the ID card. Waiting to hear from you soon. Your best friend. Touhid
Dear Reza,

Let
me
first
thank you for your great support last week. The time I spend with you was
just
amazing. It
will be always
remembered in my whole life. I
must
say you are one of the best chef ever I
seen
in my life. Thank you again for entertaining me with
some
of the best food you cooked for me. I will
surely
never the chance to visit your home in my
next
vacation.

Yesterday, I landed in my home town. It was a long haul flight. I forgot to bring my wallet back from your home, you will find it
just
beside the television.

There is no money in my wallet except my office ID card and
some
visiting cards. It will be great
help
if you can ship me back my wallet as
soon
as possible as it is mandatory for me to bring the ID card at office time.

You will find the shipping address printed
just
on the back side of the ID card.

Waiting to hear from you
soon
.

Your best friend.

Touhid
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IELTS letter you have just spend a week with a friend on holiday. when you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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