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You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include Where you stayed What the problems were How they can fix your complaints

You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include Where you stayed What the problems were How they can fix your complaints OM9VE
Dear Continental Management Team, I am writing this letter to inform you regarding the issues faced by me during my stay, last week. Room 104 on the second floor was reserved for me but unfortunately the room was not maintained properly before it was offered to me and during my stay as well. Let me elaborate the problems faced in more detail. The electronics in the room did not function properly. As, the temperature was below 0'C during nights it was extremely difficult for me to have a pleasant sleep. Further, the cable network was out of order all the time. As I watch news before sleeping every night but it was not possible as well. The room service was satisfactory because no standards for detailed cleansing were maintained. Further, the managers were not at all supportive because they did not listen to the complains properly. Therefore, this lead to the stance that no resolution of a single complaint was made during the last week. I request you to kindly review all the problems faced by me and offer me a refund for the poor services. Moreover, there is an utmost need to train your human resource staff regarding customer dealing and complaint handling. I will look forward to your earliest response. Yours Sincerely, Maham Khalid
Dear Continental Management Team, I am writing this letter to inform you regarding the issues faced by me during my stay, last week.
Room
104 on the second floor
was reserved
for me
but
unfortunately the
room
was not maintained
properly
before
it
was offered
to me and during my stay
as well
.

Let
me elaborate the problems faced in more detail. The electronics in the
room
did not function
properly
. As, the temperature was below 0'C during nights it was
extremely
difficult for me to have a pleasant sleep.
Further
, the cable network was out of order all the time. As I
watch
news
before
sleeping every night
but
it was not possible
as well
. The
room
service was satisfactory
because
no standards for detailed cleansing
were maintained
.
Further
, the managers were not at all supportive
because
they did not listen to the
complains
properly
.
Therefore
, this lead to the stance that no resolution of a single complaint
was made
during the last week.

I request you to kindly review all the problems faced by me and offer me a refund for the poor services.
Moreover
, there is an utmost need to train your human resource staff regarding customer dealing and complaint handling.

I will look forward to your earliest response. Yours
Sincerely
,
Maham
Khalid
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IELTS letter You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include Where you stayed What the problems were How they can fix your complaints

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  American English
4 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
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