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You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager and say

You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager and say 9Lbjx
Dear Sir, My name is Hargun Singh bhullar, and I have been working in the Rishi building, located on nehru road since the past year. I believe that you’re the one who handles all the matters regarding that building. Recently, I started coming to the office on a bicycle for some health reasons. However, the bicycle parking situation in the office building is pretty bad, which is very unsafe for my expensive bicycle. There is no lock system or proper place where bicyles can be parked. Moreover, there is no cage system where cycles can be locked. There are few other colleagues who ride bicycles and facing the same problem. In fact, instead of parking, I took my bicycle to the office cabin, but last week my boss requested to not bring the cycle to the office cabin. I am requesting you to fix the parking spot as soon as possible so that it is easy for all cyclists to park their cycles in a safe spot. Yours faithfully, Hargun Singh
Dear Sir,

My name is
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Hargun
Singh
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bhullar
, and I have been working in the
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Rishi
building, located on
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nehru
road since the past year. I believe that you’re the one who
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handles
all the matters regarding that building. Recently, I
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started
coming to the
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office
on a
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bicycle
for
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some
health reasons.

However
, the
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bicycle
parking situation in the
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office
building is pretty
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bad
, which is
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very
unsafe for my expensive
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bicycle
. There is no lock system or proper place where
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bicyles
can
be parked
.
Moreover
, there is no cage system where cycles can
be locked
. There are few other colleagues who ride
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bicycles
and facing the same problem. In fact,
instead
of parking, I took my
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bicycle
to the
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office
cabin,
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but
last week my boss requested to not bring the cycle to the
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office
cabin.

I am requesting you to
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fix
the parking spot as
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soon
as possible
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so
that it is easy for all cyclists to park their cycles in a safe spot.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Hargun
Singh
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IELTS letter You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager and say

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6.0
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