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Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for.

Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for. xmnK6
Dear Mom and Dad, I hope you are doing well and I am also doing great. I am delighted to inform you that I had completed my Master's degree with extremely good grades. Next month, I have convocation ceremony so, I want to invite you for this occassion. The date of the function is 20th September and timing will be 10am to 6pm. The venue of the convocation is Shanti devi auditorium. I will pick you from the main gate. Moreover, university management decides for the parents to wear the traditional clothes of the state, which will create multicultural environment in the occassion. In addition to it, you will be glad to know that I am a topper of the class. Thus, the gold medal will be given to me by the chancellor sir. Not only this, they also gave three entry tickets to the gold medalists from which 2 are for the parents and 1 extra for inviting near and dear ones. I wish Samta my bossom friend will come because she provides me moral support during my up and downs. I hope to meet you very soon. Your's truly, May 6th, 2021. John.
Dear Mom and Dad, I hope you are doing
well and
I am
also
doing great. I
am delighted
to inform you that I had completed my Master's degree with
extremely
good
grades.
Next
month, I have convocation ceremony
so
, I want to invite you for this
occassion
. The date of the function is 20th September and timing will be 10am to 6pm. The venue of the convocation is
Shanti
devi
auditorium. I will pick you from the main gate.
Moreover
, university management decides for the parents to wear the traditional clothes of the state, which will create multicultural environment in the
occassion
.
In addition
to it, you will be glad to know that I am a topper of the
class
.
Thus
, the gold medal will be
given
to me by the chancellor sir. Not
only
this, they
also
gave three entry tickets to the gold medalists from which 2 are for the parents and 1 extra for inviting near and dear ones. I wish
Samta
my
bossom
friend will
come
because
she provides me moral support during my up and downs. I hope to
meet
you
very
soon
.
Your's
truly
, May 6th, 2021. John.
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IELTS letter Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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