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Write a letter to your local library suggesting something they could do to improve their facility. In your letter. • A recount of a poor experience you had. • What you feel the library should change. • Why you feel the library needs alternation.

Write a letter to your local library suggesting something they could do to improve their facility. In your letter. • A recount of a poor experience you had. • What you feel the library should change. • Why you feel the library needs alternation. 2bo9x
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing a letter to you inform that to improve your library facilities and some alternation. I'm one of the frequent readers who cares a lot about the library and the great service that it provides our community to elaborate facilities. I have been visiting the library since 2015. I am already used to your library facilities finishing Books, Magazines, Novels, and documents. I have found some issues in our library. Firstly I have found your library air-conditional and ventilation fan properly not working because next week has started the summer season and hot weather conditions. Secondly, the library chairs are in tidy condition and I have found quietly satisfied internet connection is upgraded and to increasing more users. I would like the library is the oldest place in one of the city. All categories of people are using a kind of response on our side to maintain excellent service and facilities. I look to forwarding hearing to you yours sincerely, G. Mani.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing a letter to you inform that to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
your library facilities and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
alternation.

I'm one of the frequent readers who cares a lot about the library and the great service that it provides our community to elaborate facilities.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been visiting the library since 2015.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to your library facilities finishing Books, Magazines, Novels, and documents.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have found
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
issues in our library.
Firstly
I have found your library air-conditional and ventilation fan
properly
not working
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
next
week has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
Consider using "summer".
the summer season
and hot weather conditions.
Secondly
, the library chairs are in tidy condition and I have found
quietly
satisfied internet connection
is upgraded
and to increasing more users.

I would like the library is the oldest place in one of the city. All categories of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are using a kind of response on our side to maintain excellent service and facilities.

I look to forwarding hearing to you

yours
sincerely
,

G. Mani.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your local library suggesting something they could do to improve their facility. In your letter. • A recount of a poor experience you had. • What you feel the library should change. • Why you feel the library needs alternation.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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